Thanks for this Holden. I usually stop at step 3 and let other educate me on why I am wrong. That's because I am lazy.
I agree with Jeremy, it is very difficult to get the fierce criticism from smart people who are willing to dig in enough to be useful. We should create that space online.
Holden, you have made a good start with your pre-publication review team. I have enjoyed those (very early) exchanges and would enjoy thinking about how to expand them...
Thanks again for the work you do, Holden.