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[Creative Writing Contest] The Reset Button

Interesting thoughts, thanks for your input! I'll think about how to incorporate the feedback.

[Creative Writing Contest] The Reset Button

Fantastic comments, thank you! I included the bit about personal fulfillment because it's such an important component of being able to sustain an effective career long term, but in retrospect I was so focused on including as many EA ideas as I could that I didn't notice how out of place that sentiment is at that point in the story. I removed both that sentence and the one about more important causes, and I added a variant of your suggested replacement sentence.