Interesting thoughts, thanks for your input! I'll think about how to incorporate the feedback.
Fantastic comments, thank you! I included the bit about personal fulfillment because it's such an important component of being able to sustain an effective career long term, but in retrospect I was so focused on including as many EA ideas as I could that I didn't notice how out of place that sentiment is at that point in the story. I removed both that sentence and the one about more important causes, and I added a variant of your suggested replacement sentence.
Oh that's awesome. Thank you!
I'm glad to hear it. And sure thing!
Thanks, I'm glad you liked it!