This is some very good feedback. I deeply appreciate it.

The idea is that cocoons enable unfettered improvisation. So you are correct that "we need to build these things in order to reenable improv." I need to do a better job connecting that idea to the rest of the contents.

If any altruist wishes to donate a few moments and keystrokes to tell me why heavily downvoting this is warranted, it would probably produce a positive effect.

Thanks for letting me know, Tristan. It was a Medium draft. Please try again.