Hello all,
I am new to the EA Forum. Recently, I wrote “Where’s Today’s Beethoven?” you ask? in response to Holden Karnofsky’s “Where’s Today’s Beethoven?” post. Holden said he enjoyed reading my post.
With the hope of creating as strong an application as possible for the FTX Future Fund, I am seeking feedback on my writing.
Thank you so much. :-)
This is some very good feedback. I deeply appreciate it.
The idea is that cocoons enable unfettered improvisation. So you are correct that "we need to build these things in order to reenable improv." I need to do a better job connecting that idea to the rest of the contents.