I agree with you. I will do my best to create a more concise argument in my own voice - I freely admit to using LLMs for idea development, but I need to take ownership of the content creation. Thanks for the constructive feedback. 

I agree with your critique. This is my first post on this forum, and while I had an idea of the rigor this audience would demand, I see how this falls short. Thank you for your feedback - I will be more diligent in future posts.